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"I'm happy being different, my world is much more vast than theirs..."
Oh god the effort DX I've been working on this a while
trying to get over the issues I had with drawing rock and sea. I've also got to use my new way of drawing clouds ^^
I wasn't sure if I'd allow the crit. on this
cause I've put so much effort into it but I want to get better so... x3
If I did it again I think I'd use a smaller brush for the grass :/
But please, if you wanna crit. my work don't tell me whats wrong with it XD tell me how to fix it 
I like to know that the crit. knows what they're on about ^^
All (c) *Nai-Akari
You are not permitted to use this artwork. Thank you <3
Oh god the effort DX I've been working on this a while
trying to get over the issues I had with drawing rock and sea. I've also got to use my new way of drawing clouds ^^I wasn't sure if I'd allow the crit. on this
cause I've put so much effort into it but I want to get better so... x3 If I did it again I think I'd use a smaller brush for the grass :/
But please, if you wanna crit. my work
don't tell me whats wrong with it XD tell me how to fix it I like to know that the crit. knows what they're on about ^^All (c) *Nai-Akari
You are not permitted to use this artwork. Thank you <3
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactLets start out with the beauty of this piece. The rocks texture upfront is really unique, and a good style. It's different from others textures, but thats what makes it great. Yes, the front part of the back ground is semi realistic. You added great depth and details into it, but the grass can use some work. It sticks out in to many ways- yes, it's not in all one direction, but some pieces can be going on the same side. the grass itself looks to clumpy.
But the ocean, and islands in the back isn't really, well, persuasive. Though anyone can tell you aimed for realism- yet only achieved semi realism. The isnlans look abandoned, blank, like a giant rock. do they have plants? any life? then show it- add some small , not so detailed (because its a farther perspective) little plants or tree tops, something.
The ocean looks a bit flat. maybe add some more lighting, or small dots of light or bubbles. all the perfectly straight lines make it look to perfect- fake.
over all it's a very great piece, you can really understand the feelings and emotions coming from it. I hope this critique isn't too harsh- i tried to be constructive and suggestive.